Front Cover: Looking a lot more in line with the conventions we expect from a music magazine. - Could you consider your top title 'Berkshires no 1 music magazine' remember this is something you are aiming to sell nationally not locally! - Do you think you could include more features on your front cover that may attract your audience? - Can you include the issue date/number? Website?
Contents: Again looking better. - You are not giving much information about what each section of your magazine entails could there be a little sentence underneath each 'title' explaining what the article is about? - Your Free Prize section needs to stick out to the readers and allure them - think about colour and boxing out that section - make it exciting! Could they answer a question and enter online or by text? - The page needs more to it. - Please sign off your editors note with your name, if you can find a font that makes it look personal to you like a signature. - Can you change the font of the directors note?
Double Page Spread: I like your images but can you try and sort the darker photo on the right to do this you you can copy the image on the bottom left and have it as the same image top right. - Consider the spacing of your pull quote making sure it has space and stands out. - Can you make the quick fire questions box more appealing? - Can you use a different colour to differentiate question from answer. - Don't forget the conventions we expect such as page numbers!
Front Cover: Looking a lot more in line with the conventions we expect from a music magazine.
ReplyDelete- Could you consider your top title 'Berkshires no 1 music magazine' remember this is something you are aiming to sell nationally not locally!
- Do you think you could include more features on your front cover that may attract your audience?
- Can you include the issue date/number? Website?
Contents: Again looking better.
- You are not giving much information about what each section of your magazine entails could there be a little sentence underneath each 'title' explaining what the article is about?
- Your Free Prize section needs to stick out to the readers and allure them - think about colour and boxing out that section - make it exciting! Could they answer a question and enter online or by text?
- The page needs more to it.
- Please sign off your editors note with your name, if you can find a font that makes it look personal to you like a signature.
- Can you change the font of the directors note?
Double Page Spread: I like your images but can you try and sort the darker photo on the right to do this you you can copy the image on the bottom left and have it as the same image top right.
- Consider the spacing of your pull quote making sure it has space and stands out.
- Can you make the quick fire questions box more appealing?
- Can you use a different colour to differentiate question from answer.
- Don't forget the conventions we expect such as page numbers!